tighten
/ˈtaɪtən/
remove unnecessary words while preserving meaning
tighten in a sentence
“First draft: 100 words. Tightened: 60 words. Same meaning, more power.”
Origin of tighten
From physically tightening, making compact
Related Words
expand
add detail, examples, or explanation where needed
cut
remove words, sentences, or sections that don't contribute
line edit
editing at the sentence level for clarity and style
developmental edit
editing for structure, argument, and overall organization
kill your darlings
be willing to cut even your favorite passages if they don't serve the work
show, don't tell
convey through concrete detail rather than abstract statement